Broken Man:
As the skin parts for the razor,
And, as I peel back the layers,
I reveal what’s hidden within,
Remnants of times I chose to give in,
And though their buried deep,
My scars, they still weep,
I finally see who I really am,
Just a broken man.
Inspired by the daily post’s daily one word prompt: Layers
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Okay, self proclaimed Poetry God this is so good. We’re back to normal Drew, and I love it. ❤️ I do love sarcastically evil and funny Drew poems as well. I like when he comes out to play. 🤗 I still have nothing written for my poems. It will come eventually I suppose.
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Ha, lots of poetry sites out there to help you out as you full well know from looking for butterfly poems! 😂
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I only Googled that for fun. 😝 Clearly, Fifty Shades of Fluffy was from my own deviant mind. 😉 Emotions…hmm what are these things? I’ll have to do some digging to complete my part of the challenge. If it was a scene I was writing instead of poetry, I would’ve had it done already. I could write that no problem. Fiction comes more natural to me.
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Ha, the poem may have been from your own deviant mind but you stole the title from me! 😂 there you go, title for your sequel poem Smutterfly: The Queen of Smut! 😂
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I did ask you what you thought I should name it. Yay! New title! I love it! I’m using it, too! I just sent you the weirdest email of life. Seriously. Wait until you see what I think some of those words mean. 🙈
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Ha, well we’ll see how well that title fits with No Thrills Jills role in Fluffy 2! 😂
I’ll give you a clue about the slang words, there not all about smut and sex else you’d get them all right with your smutiness! 😂
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Haha! But by saying they’re not all about sex, that implies some of them are. Thanks for the hint! 😉 Was I right about Rumpy pumpy? I so want to be right about that one cause it makes me laugh when I envision what I wrote down. 🙊 Well, I’m now the crowed Queen of Smut according to Drew, so I guess I have a reputation to maintain. When are you posting Fluffy 2? I need to see it. 😂
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Really good, I like dark poems. I’ve been looking for a while now for a text tattoo and I always go for the dark ones. Maybe I should do a post one day and ask opinions about the ones I consider, although I’m a little scared nobody will like dark lines. I’m definitely not a carpe diem person ;-).
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Thanks. 😊 Carpe Diem and a that sucks, thought with the dark stuff I write I’m bound to say that.
I’d say that’s a great idea for a post!
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Like and Relate.
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This is seriously good, Drew! Loved it!
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Very dark, but very real. Loved it.
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