I didn’t offer you the world,
It would have been a lie,
For the world,
It wasn’t mine to simply give,
I offered you my love,
It could have helped in time,
For my love,
It was mine to freely give,
I offered you my heart,
It was all I ever had,
For my heart,
It was yours to always break,
And I gave you me,
I wasn’t enough.
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Nice piece, dude. One of these days you will write one filled with sunshine, rainbows and Jerry Lawler’s favourite: PUPPIES!
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Cheers and I have a trilogy of poems about a promiscuous rabbit called Fluffy on the blog, can’t do sunshine and rainbows.😂
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Those poems sound hilarious. I was toying with something similar, just not rabbits.
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I was really feeling this and then Fluffy appeared in the comments and sidelined me 😂 Great as always and very moving though.
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Ha, Fluffy will forever haunt the blogging world.😂
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This was very, very beautiful, Drew, I love it 🙂 ❤
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Thank you.😀
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Loved it!!! ❤ continue on with your awesomeness!!!
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Thank you! 🙂
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Powerful. Thank you for posting this!
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Thank you.
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Great touching poem. Thanks for sharing. I just posted a poem I wrote. I write to feel at peace. I appreciate the wording and passion of yours. It has a simplicity to it which i like a lot. Thanks for sharing it
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Thank you and yes, it’s only simple rhyming stuff but it works for me.😀
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Really beautiful and sentimental 👌 You write so well. Well done. Have a nice day!! 😊
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Thank you.😀
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Good piece, keep up the good work!
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Thank you.
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Very well worded and so true. That’s one of those painful memories a person wishes to never face and one I’ve had to battle with for too long. At least there’s Fluffy, right? Thanks for sharing 🙂
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Fluffy?? That damn rabbit, sigh, it will haunt my blog forever!
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Nice 👍🏻👍🏻
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Nice
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Simple, yet powerful and very moving
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Thank you, sometimes simple is best, if it gets the meaning across and evokes emotion then it’s OK to be simple.😀
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its simple and its so pretty ❤
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Thank you.
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