When darkness decides,
All the anger, the hatred,
The sorrow will rise,
When darkness decides,
All the torment, the torture,
The pain makes you cry,
When darkness decides,
All the sadness, the hurting,
The eyes tell you why,
When darkness decides,
And the only way out,
Is to let go of life……
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Absolutely gut-wrenching.
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You know me Stephy, misery writer!😂
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I love it but it also breaks my heart.
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Lol why?
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Because it is so sad! That’s why!
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Ha, sad is what I write!
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So terribly sad. Such a good poem and an amazing impact at the end.
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Thank you and yeah, it was sad, unfortunately that was how I was feeling when I wrote it.😢
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Only way out is to let go of life….wonderfully catchy, emotive, and well written
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Thank you.
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Man, that’s really dark. 😢
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You have to decide that the darkness no longer has a voice at some point, but in the meantime this is beautifully melancholic. I am glad you have this healthy outlet dear friend.
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Unfortunately that is hard to do, the darkness is always there hidden beneath, just at times it comes to the front and appears.
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I do understand that my friend. It took me many years to let go of some serious stuff. Not sure I fully have. I hope you rest and enjoy your weekend unplugged. Sending the kind of hugs that wont damage your bad buy rep haha 😉
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I did enjoy my break, thank you, was becoming jaded by blogging and needed the step back for a couple of days. Written a post on it, 3,700 words, God I can ramble!😂
Ha, my bad boy rep, I think secretly part of me wants to be the nice guy of blogging!😂
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Chilling stuff, beautifully written and extremely sad. I had a go at writing a poem for the first time in years, the other day. It’s not as beautiful as this one, just a bit of silliness if you’d like to read it:
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Thank you, I’ll check your poem out.😀
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This speaks to me…so much. I’ve had one of the toughest weeks I’ve had in a long time and this poem just sums it up.
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That sucks that you’ve had a very tough week and that this poem speaks to you, it’s very dark even for what I normally write but it’s unfortunately how I was feeling.😞
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That’s the beauty of writing isn’t it. It doesn’t make everything better, but it feels good to put a bit of your soul on some paper 😊 I hope you are feeling better 💜
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That is very true, I don’t really class myself as a poet as I only use a simple rhyming style and not all the fancy types there are but there’s something about expressing how you’re feeling and writing it down, it doesn’t make it any better but it’s constructive and when you read it it makes you think think.
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This… I think, of all your poems and how much I’ve liked them, this one takes No 1 spot. Short yet all is said and on a topic that a lot of minds process often…
I love this poem.. and I understand it… however, wagging my own tail here, a long time ago, I made darkness and misery my bitches! It’s strange how oppressive feelings can shatter lives and yet at the same time, make a mind thrive… it’s either give up, or scramble for survival… shut down or use the simmering emotions to create something beautiful! Not only do you create but you share as well… and that is the best!
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Thank you Liz.😀 Yeah, it’s quite short but any longer and I’d have been adding for the hell of it and what I wrote just seemed to get the feeling across really well.
Lol, wagging your own tail!😂 Yeah, I create, it’s cathartic to write down what you’re feeling rather than keeping it inside. I’m glad you managed to make darkness and misery your b#tches, most of the time I’m the same just at times the damn things come back and creep out!😂
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Perfect- it’s good to know when to stop writing as soon as you realize that the message you’re trying to put across, has been said.
Re wagging your own tail- isn’t this a saying or something? In Estonian it goes something like- well, who else will wag the dog’s tail other than the dog himself?’ so… self-praise for the win! 😀
Oh, the damn things to keep battling on, but it’s the beauty of humans I find- we can manage a whole damn lot emotionally and physically. We don’t even realize how much we can manage sometimes, but we do and I think a lot of the times we don’t give ourselves enough credit for overcoming the oppressive feelings… Quite honestly? Not to sound like a total eejit, but during my own emotional times of turmoil, I actually wrote pretty decent stuff… It’s like, my mind is unable to put emotion into anything I write when Im happy… strange… but- you keep on writing whenever you need to and we shall keep on reading and relating and supporting! 🙂
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Yeah, there’s a UK saying similar to that about self praise though I’m struggling to remember what the actual saying is at the moment!😂
Ha, I feel that, I can’t write poetry for sh#t when I’m happy, look what happened when I tried to write happy poetry, that damn rabbit Fluffy was born!😂
Thank you, reading, relating and supporting is always appreciated.😀
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Awe, the Fluffy poem was mighty though.. you should defo have a dabble for a happy poem for the Queen’s Talent Contest! (Now there’s an idea… I might run one 😀 )
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Ha, the talent contest is an interesting idea, Queen Fussypussy the freaking third cordially invites you all to join her in showcasing your talents, anything goes!😂
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Welll… I’m not entirely sure about the ‘anything’ part… would not want to get pinged with some weird images… but yeah, poems and drawings and flash fiction… damn it.. I really need to do this! 😀
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Lol, true, probably get some right weird stuff if you allowed anything to go! All of us are bad enough, just imagine what the crazies would come up with, if anything went! 😉 Oh well, the PC response would at least be amusing! 😂
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You’re back!!!!! Hope you had a good time off and all’s well!
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Yeah, I have returned, all’s better, mainly, wrote a post on feeling jaded by blogging, but I’m back, guess we all need a break at times.
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For sure! Welcome back, anyway! 🙂
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Cheers Queen.😀
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Its true. We all have to face such a point in are life. Relatable and catchy yet heart-wrenching.
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