Sometimes our hearts they break,
Fractured from all of our mistakes,
I never wanted your sympathy,
I only needed you to believe,
I wished that you could see,
The strength that lives in me,
I’ll weather this storm alone,
I can make it back on my own,
Set sail towards the guiding light,
Find my way through the darkest night,
I don’t need your helping hand,
I’m tattered but I can still stand,
There’s one thing you should know,
I’m still here, not letting go,
This time I won’t run,
I will overcome,
Until my last breath, I will fight,
(I won’t give in)
I won’t give up on my life.
Inspired in part by the daily prompts Sympathy and Overcome
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I love the defiant streak running through your words! It shows that no matter how beaten and broken you are, there’s still hope. There’s still a chance that you can rise and triumph!
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Thank you and yeah, something abit less morose than normal with an ‘I will survive’ attitude.
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Also, I like the title too! It shares its title with the title of my favourite ‘those’ books!
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Oh crap, Yuck, I’d better change the title, don’t want an association with those damn books and their filthy readers.😂
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I needed to read this today. Thank so much for sharing your heart!
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I really liked this poem. It almost needed some accommodating music 🙂
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Thank you. Alas, if I was in anyway musically talented it might have, but I’m not!😂
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You’re welcome! 🙂 Oh, haha, it’s still a lovely poem, with or without music!
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Lovely?! Shudders!😂😂
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HA! I’m sorry, I forgot that word isn’t part of your vocabulary! 😛
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That is true.😂 It should be banned from being used on my blog.😂
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Poof! It’s been obliterated 😝😂
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This is one of my favourite if your poems
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Thank you.😀
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I always think your songs should be set to music
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Thank you.😀 Alas, I have absolutely no musical ability!😂
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great poem, oh my gosh you are so talented!!!
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Thank you.😀
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Double/triple YES! to this poem Drew! Love what this poem delivers because sometimes, a lot of the times, we really need to just weather the storm on our own and by gods we shall do it! 😉
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Thanks Liz.😀
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Brilliant!!
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Thank you.😀
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You’re welcome 😀
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I love this!
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Thank you.
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This is much more optimistic in terms of your poems and I love that! It is laced with an element of resilience and determination to overcome. Fantastic Drew!
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Thanks, on occasion there is some slight optimism!😂
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