I’m tired of the hurt,
Never learned to live,
I’m drowning in the river,
Light don’t seem to shine,
I’m Broken by the pain,
Damaged by design,
I’m giving up this time,
Writing my demise,
I’m saying goodbye,
Walking far away,
I’m choosing to die,
Ending my own life…..
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Its dark but I really love it. Hope you’re not really going away. You’re poetry is amazing ❤
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Thank you, most poetry I write is dark, can’t seem to do light and happy!😂
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I can’t stop reading this over and over again. It’s dark and intense… yet captivating.
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Everything poetry related I write is dark, I’ll definitely take captivating though!😀
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Very intense & powerful, hope you’re ok chum?
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I have good days and bed, I’m generally OK and get over my thoughts though I’m incapable of writing happy poetry even if I was happy it’d still end up dark.😂
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You had me genuinely worried with that one bud! Your poetry is always so full of feeling & so real – never change that x
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This poetry is wonderful. I do hope you are doing okay though?
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Thank you and yeah, I’m doing OK, good days and bad and all that.
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This is very deep & dark but beautiful. Hugs to you my fellow ‘Drew’ you make many people smile, just wanted to tell you that x
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Most poetry I write is deep and dark, just find it easy to write which I guess is surprising when I write blog posts that are fun and sarcastic.😂
Thank you, it doesn’t feel like I make people smile at times with all the nonsense I tend to get too but I appreciate it.😀
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Tragic decision.. Damaged indeed. Nicely composed, Drew.
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Thank you.
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Painful and something many of us can relate to. Hope and hugs to you.
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Had those thoughts, made that choice!
21 stitches and 18 years later.
I am glad it failed. How many times in those 18 years have I smiled, laughed, brought someone comfort, felt loved, wanted and accepted.
It could all have been over, at just 16 years old. Because I just wanted to give up, I was so tired of feeling the way I did. Exhausted by the self hatred etc.
But I never knew, things could & would change for me 💖
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Are you OK? This is really dark. More than usual. Got your back.
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Yeah, I’m doing OK thanks, wouldn’t say I’m happy happy but I’m OK.
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