I fall to pieces as I fall apart,
Words carved from the heart,
I’m letting go of this world,
No more of my story to be told,
Will you remember when I’m gone?
This is my saddest song,
For sorrow, for pain,
I’m alone in the rain,
Ending my heartache,
Giving my time away,
For life, I no longer care,
My lament of despair.
Inspired in part by the WordPress daily prompt: Song
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Wow… a deeply sad song…..
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That is sad! 😢
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Days like this suck. Beautiful words to describe those feelings.
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Dude, this is dark, but I totally empathise with it. 👍🏼👊🏼 I’ve occasionally thought that I should write poetry as an outlet for my feelings, but I don’t. I’m a keep-shit-to-myself kinda guy, generally.
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Do it, even just write it in a notebook you don’t have to share feels good though
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Excellent!
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That’s deep, very moving
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I also have a poem about a sad song, will let you know when i post it some day
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It’s really good, like the lyrics of a song 🙂
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Thank you. Are you feeling alright? That comment could almost have been you being nice! You’re normally sarcastic and mean and mention cookies you don’t share.😂🙄
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Lmao!! It’s the too bright sun – it’s gone to my head. 😂
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I thought something was strange.😂
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LMAO! 😂
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