The scars I wear for all to see,
They show the journey that is me,
I’m bonded by the chains I’ve made,
I’m shackled by the hands of fate,
Forever, I will always walk alone,
Lost, bereft without a home,
This broken man who no-one loves,
The empty soul, I’m not enough,
I’m tethered to this life of pain,
I wish that someone knew my name.
When I’m not writing foul-mouthed and sarcastic blog posts I also dabble in the occasional poetry. I can be a real miserable fucker and this is inspired in part by today’s daily prompt: Tether
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Hi,
That was nice of your reader to re-blog your poem. I love rhyming poems.
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I followed you on Twitter. Thank you for the link.
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It’s interesting to see your concept of tether, perhaps being Scottish, I instantly thought of “patience” when I saw thether – as in I’m at the end of my tether with this today
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Ha, true, tether/tethering also means using a smartphone to connect a computer/laptop to the Internet. So, three meanings and I went with the one I could use for some misery.😂
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words are so much fun when they have more than one meaning. Shoot, words are just fun!
Strong thoughts, my friend.
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“Forever, I will always walk alone,
Lost, bereft without a home”
Those two lines really hit home. I often feel like that too 🙁 I won’t use the dreaded ‘b’ word, but what a wonderfully emotive piece. Shorter than some of your other poems, but it packs just as much a punch with the weight of emotion in each line.
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The ‘b’ word? Balls? Boll#cks? Bloody? Bast#rd? Barnabus? Bolivar? Belligerent? Breakfast? Bacon? Beef? Botswana? Bananas? Bosoms? Bottom? Button? Burp? Banality? Oh, you mean that ‘b’ word!😂
Ha, true, shorter but still emotive, showing that size doesn’t always matter! Bwahahahaha!😂
Nah, I wrote what I wanted and it conveyed the meaning that I wanted and if I’d made it longer it would have just been adding sentences for the sake of it. Whereas what I wrote did the job.😀
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Yes, THAT ‘b’ word 😛
Yeah, I agree. Adding extra, unnecessary sentences is pointless if you’ve already gotten your message across. It wouldn’t add to the piece, if anything it would detract from it instead.
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Well it took me a while to figure out what ‘b’ word you meant, there are so many ‘b’ words that it could have been! Though I’d rather you use that ‘b’ word than another ‘b’ word on my blog, Bieber – shudders!😂
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Eugh, don’t use that word in this sacred space! I thought you were better than that! 😨
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Hey! My blog isn’t a sacred space, it’s more like an anything goes brothel!😂
Bwahahahaha, what word? You mean Bieber? As in Jazztin Bieber?!?😂
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It’s sacred compared to the horrors of a Bieber concert!
Okay, so Sprog and Jabz I can deal with…but fucking JAZZTIN BIEBER!? Nah, there are lines you just do not cross! If you ever use that name again to refer to me, I will…I will find out where you live and COVER your ENTIRE house in photocopies of ABTASTIC ROMANCE NOVEL COVERS!
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Ooohhh, she’s using dirty nasty swear words and capitals!😂 Chillax Jazztin, chillax!😂 So, no Jazztin Bieber?! Jazztin Bieber?! Is that right? You don’t want to be referred to as Jazztin Bieber??😂😂😂
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Do you want to wake up with so many abtastic covers pasted to your house that you can’t even open the front door!?
Don’t tarnish my dark and brooding persona with your mean names 😥
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Well……if I can’t open the front door then I can’t go to work, fine by me!😂
Mean names?! I am not mean and hey, at least I don’t go around threatening people, not very mature and adult like really is it Jazztin?!😠🙁💀😂
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But, think about this, if you can’t go to work where will you get cash for your books and video games, hm!?
I’m a new adult, I’m still learning! YOU, in your age and wisdom, should be setting us youngsters an example!
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Lol ‘new adult’ is that better or worse than ‘young adult?’😂
Savings! And, I’ve still got a long way to go in my current game and the publishers give me books so I’m good, do your worst!😂
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Nice poem
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Thoughtful, meaningful and just the right length
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Wow, this was really good, and pretty short too! Nicely done.
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Thanks and yeah, shorter than normal but I wrote all I needed to to get the meaning across, adding anything else would have just been meaningless words.
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Love this line “I’m shackled by the hands of fate,” 😊
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Thank you.
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Nice poem me too love the line “I’m shackled by the hands of fate,”
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Thank you.
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its good
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Thanks
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“I wish that someone knew my name”
Priceless!
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Hey! Loved this poem, would you check out https://tanyatale.wordpress.com/2017/08/25/poetry-with-deveaux-fraiser-cracked/
This guy is a amazing poet and I’d love for you to see his work
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I love this.
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raw truth, misery’s truth, unspoken truth…love this one
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Check out mine and then tell me how much more pain you expect
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