On this fateful day,
Seven years ago,
You went away,
Your story ending,
You left this world,
Forgiveness,
Redemption,
Chapters of your life,
In death remain untold,
Now, I stand here,
The ghosts that haunt,
Surround, are still near,
As I look upon your grave,
I couldn’t call you father,
Even call you friend,
You were a bastard,
Up until your end,
As I lay these flowers down,
Please know,
I’m a damaged man,
But inside I’ve grown,
While I can’t forget,
I can forgive,
God didn’t make you suffer,
Letting you fade in peace,
I know the pain of watching,
Would have broken my Mother,
Contemplating,
Reflecting,
On this cold day in December,
You weren’t as bad,
As I once remembered,
Reconciliation,
Sadly, is a bridge to far,
A lifetime to late,
But,
Maybe in some way,
You were absolved,
You atoned,
And judging,
God truly knew,
That at times,
I would miss…….
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Fuck it, Drew! –> heart.bleed.
Great poem, sad feelings… Here’s a hug!
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Thanks and lol Liz, it’s language like that that’ll get you in spam jail!😂
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oops… ah well.. it’s worth it! that poem really punched in the feels and if I’m not allowed to show emotion then I welcome spam jail!
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Well thank you.😀 here’s hoping you don’t get put in spam jail to.😀
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nah, man, I’ll proudly serve my time… 😀 *free speech* and all that… 😀 hahaha..
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Lol.😂
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Can I just “second” this comment?
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Lol. 😀
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Amazing! Wow!
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Thank you.
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I’m floored. Wow. Beautifully written.
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Thank you.
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That’s really beautiful and heartbreaking at the same time. Nice poem
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Thanks.
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Beautifully deep and heartbreaking. Thanks for sharing something so personal with us. ❤
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Thank you.😀 Most poetry I write has some semblance of being personal to it.
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Wow.! I have no words. So powerful and….wow!
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Thank you.
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Sad, sad stuff. You must have a complex soul to always pour out beautiful poems like this. 😉
– Lashaan
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Thank you.😀
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Wow good job!
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Thank you.
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This is one of those moments when you read something and get to the end and realise you have just witnessed the truest beauty born from deep pain. But in the writing there is often release, at least that’s what I have experienced. And even if sending it out there only gives a partial relief, it is still relief. Thanks for sharing xx
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Thank you. 🙂
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Wow, this was amazing and so heart-breaking.
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Thank you.
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Oh, touchy subject for me with this one. Brilliant piece Marshie!
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Thank you.
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